First Poem by the poem freak!!!

[Stipe]

I wish for what can never be done
There is no peace, there is not love
I want for life to fufill itself
THough I know that can't be true
I loved and fell
I tried and failed
My soul grows cold
My heart is stone
I wished for peace and what I saw
It tore my dreams apart
With every step i take
I see what truth it shows
It shows me that my life is nothng
But I care not, not at all
I care not for the life
I've been told time and time again
You're cold ad heartless
Live up to it I shall
Spread my wings and fall
Join me in my heartless walk
This shall be our quest
To end this hopless dream we carried
And carry the bloody tears in our eyes
Come, join me in my hopeless battle


sorry guys but all my poems are really dark...Do you like it?? do you want more??? NO? okay

[Chelle]

That is a great poem Stripe. The more gloomy and dreary ones are the most inspiring. I have a few that I wrote recently.

No Title 1

I have no feeling
My touch is numb
Frozen in time
There is no light
Darkness come upon me
Relieve me of this pain
Take away the hurt
Release me in the rain
Burning drops pour all around
Running down my skin
Steaming and seeping onto the ground
My life has nothing to give
I am nothing important
In the eyes of those who live
I hide away in the shadows
Wishing and hoping in a way
That life would be brighter someday

My Deep Sleep

My pain grows stronger
My head hurts more
I can not take it
This hurt I feel now
No one caring
All being greedy
Leaving me out
Isolating myself
In a dark room
I lay there alone
Wishing to be sleeping
Hoping to be alive
I sleep now
In a deep,dark place
I belong in this world
Of insanity and pain
I feel no more
I do not care what happens
I care only of this darkness
A place of deep sleep
All alone in this world
I sleep with a monster untold

Darkness of Nothing

My pain and anger
Overpowers my soul
The shadow appears
And surrounds me whole
I see the darkness
The light does not show
My power is lost
My heart is no more
The emptiness overpowers
My mind and spirit
I feel nothing
No emotions
None at all
I hate with fire
And love or like no more
I wish to disappear
And be in a world of my own
I drift away in a sleepless world
Insomnia overtakes me
Leaving me no rest
I am all alone
Silence is comforting
Nothing to worry about
Hearing no voices
Seeing no faces
I am in a world of no existence

A Place of My Heart

I dream of a place
Where drops of rain pour
A place of happiness and love
The sight of beauty and light
The chill morning awakes
The leaves of turning color
The smell of the sweet air
A dream I once lived for
Breath-taking is this landscape
Where I want to be someday
The beauty of green grass
The sight of the trees swaying
I lived this dream today
It brings hope to my heart
Forever will it be the place
My heart will never depart

My Mind

I’m trapped inside
Nothing can break me out
In a cage I stay in
I’m lonely and lost
Dark and evil are things that surround me
No one caring
No one seeing
The things that hurt me
They leave marks of pain
The hurt that scars me for life
I do not receive care or love
I’m alone
In a place, that describes hell

My Indescribeable World

I seem to be in a dark tunnel that looks like home to me
I can't see the other side of it
There is no light
There will never be any light no more
I just perish away from this earth, and drift to a place where I belong
No one can be there to help because they do not exist
I am shadowed with no love and warmth anymore
With no care of the world and the people that surround me
I'm just a shadow that is lifeless
Everyone goes through me, and doesn't notice that I am there
I'm immortal and I plan on staying that way.
Too much has gone through my head that I cannot keep up with those who live
I may as well disappear and never be thought of again
There is no life or hope anymore

[peregrina took]

WoW!
Very creative you two..*hugs*
i luv your poems indeed...what more can i say?
job well done......



"Oi! i wubb Fruit Loops!'

[Stipe]

OMG!! I was beginning to think that nobody here was gonna ever read my poetry!! THNX though!!! so much...And I love yours....I knos what yu mean!! I don't understand light and fluffy poetry!! It is a mind washing technique to make every1 beleive the world is nice and safe...(hahhaa) ...Thank goodness for paranoids like me!!